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Fox McCloud Tickled

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Things were looking grim for Fox McCloud has he opened his eyes. He looked around to see that he was in some sort of room he had never seen before. There was a lot of stuff where he was and most of that stuff were brown boxes.

“I don’t know how I ended up here but I need to get out of here.”

Fox was about to get up and head for the door but for some reason he could move his body as he tried getting up. As the light shined in the room, Fox saw the reason why he couldn’t move.

His wrists were cuffed to the walls of the room, he was sitting on a red cushion with his tail cuffed to the wall as well, and his ankles were locked in metal stocks so he couldn’t move them.

“What the heck is going on?!”

Fox was trying to free himself from the cuffs as he started moving back and forth trying to break free. Just then he heard the sound of a clicking noise as Fox looked towards the door and saw it open.

The person who opened the door looked liked some sort of alien dog that had pink skin and had a brown nurse hat on the head. “Hey who are you?!”

“Now now there’s no need to shout Fox McCloud.”

“Wait you know my name?! Who are you?!”

“My name is Monick and I have brought you here for a reason Fox McCloud.”

She walked over to him as Monick stopped and kneeled down in front of Fox’s boots. She then smiled at him as she removed his red boots from his feet to relieve his white socks.

“Hey what do you think you’re doing?!”

Monick smiled again as she removed his socks to relieve his furry feet. “Wow Fox McCloud you have some nice feet.” She placed her finger on the middle of his pad which Fox flinched to.

“Oh is someone a bit ticklish?”

“N-No why would you think that?!”

Monick smiled as she pulled something from out from her back. It was a white feather and she started waving it back and forth. As she was waving the feather, Fox was looking at it and he looked kind of scared to see it.

“Don’t worry Fox I’m going to see if…you’re ticklish.”

“Wait what?! You don’t want to do that! Please don’t do that!”

Monick snickered as she placed the big feather on Fox McCloud’s soles and then started stroking the feather up and down. This feeling was so ticklish to Fox that he couldn’t hold in his laughter and started laughing.

“GAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NO STOP IT TICKLES IT TICKLES AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA COME ON IT TICKLES AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Fox laughed.

“So you are ticklish Fox. This is going to be fun.”

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS IS NOT FUN AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP THIS RIGHT NOW AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

This continued for about ten minutes as Fox was holding back his tears as Monick continued to tickle his soles with the feather.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA COME ON THIS IS TOO MUCH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU HAVE TO STOP THIS NOW AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Fox laughed.

“Hmmm no I won’t Fox McCloud.”

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA WHY NOT AHAHAHAHAHA I HAVEN’T DONE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ANYTHING WRONG AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

Monick then pulled out another white feather from her back and then started tickling Fox McCloud’s soles with two feathers which drove him nuts.

“BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OH MAN THIS IS TOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHORTURE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP THIS AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Fox laughed.

This continued for thirty minutes as Fox could no longer hold back his tears as Monick continued to tickle him with the feathers.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NO MORE OF THIS AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEASE THIS IS TOO MUCH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA COME ON AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

Monick then started tickling his soles much faster as a smile appeared on her face. As this continued, Fox was shaking his head at the speed that Monick was going he couldn’t take much more. Monick then started tickling in between his toes which he couldn’t take.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOT THE TOES AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OH JEEZ AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP IT ALREADY AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

An hour later Monick had stopped tickling Fox McCloud because he had reached his limit and passed out. She placed her feathers on the floor and started walking over towards the door.

“That was fun Fox McCloud I can’t wait to do this again.”

Monick smiled and chuckled as she looked over back at Fox McCloud, opened the door, and left the room leaving Fox McCloud still passed out.
An art trade I did with :iconlu456:

For his part he wanted a story about his character Monick tickling Fox McCloud. Hope you like it:)

These characters are not mine.
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smooshieone's avatar
wtf who is this monick person