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It was a sunny and cloudy Saturday afternoon around 12:30 P.M. and around a small community that had a nice cooling breeze blowing in the air of the community. A few people were walking on the sidewalks going up the sidewalks and some people were going down the sidewalks trying to get to their destinations. Some were just going up the sidewalks while some were heading for a nearby city which was a few miles away.

There is a two house that isn't close to the city and not close to the community where a woman named Leth lives but she is no ordinary woman she is half hedgehog half echidna. Inside the house she is in the living room sitting on the left side of her big sofa reading a medium sized book that has a red cover on it as she flips a page of the book and continues to read again.

Leth has dull gray skin, long spiky gray hair with natural black tips, and 'glowing' neon yellow eyes. She's wearing a yellow wrap around her neck, a simple short black tank top that stops just at the end of her ribs and showed a little bit of her cleverage, dark gray shorts with her grey tail sticking out from the back, black gloves with her white claws sticking out from the fingertips, and white shoes with black curves on them.

She stopped reading for a second as she turned her head over to the right to see the clock that was over the stairs that led up to her room. "So it's 12:33 P.M. huh…I guess I can continue to read for a little while now." She turned away from the clock as she went back reading her book but before she could even read there was a knock on the door.

"Yes who is it?" she asked.

"Hey Leth it's me Bolt can I come in?"

"…sure the door is open."

The front door swung opened as Bolt the Hedgehog dashed into the house sitting right next to Leth with a smile on his face. He's wearing his black short sleeved shirt with a yellow lightning bolt in the center, black jeans with two big pockets on the sides along with his yellow tail in the back, and black sneakers with black laces on top. "So Bolt what brings you here to my house hm?"

"I'm glad you asked hehe."

He chuckled as he moved his hands behind her sofa and brought up two things: One was a brown pair of stocks with some long brown rope and another was a blue colored bucket filled with 'supplies' such as two long white feathers, two big hair brushes, massage oil, and two silver forks. She took a peek inside the bucket and then look a look at the stocks and sighed as she went back to her reading. "Forget it Bolt not today."

"I have no idea what you're-"

"I know what you're planning and I won't do it," she said as she opened her book. "No way you're tickling me Bolt."

He frowned as he was going to say something but Leth put up her right index finger stopping him from talking. "My answer is still no and there is nothing you can do about it." She went back reading her book as Bolt dropped the bucket and stocks to the floor gently. He then started planning something in his head as he sat Indian style on the sofa thinking as Leth continued reading.

"Hmmm there's gotta be a way to…wait that's it! Why didn't I do that from the start?!"

He grinned as he dashed out of the house for a split second which made Leth lose her page to where she was reading. Once she found the page on where she was she lost it again as Bolt came back but he had a wide smile on his face as he was standing up and had his two hands behind his back which made Leth close her book. "Ok Bolt why are you smiling?" she asked as she stood up from the sofa.

He chuckled as he removed his right arm from his back and revealed a silver pendulum being held onto a long brown string. Leth raised her right eye brow as she stared at pendulum watching it swinging back and forth. "That's right Leth keep your eyes on the pendulum." She continued moving her eyes the same way the pendulum was moving but suddenly she was feeling sleepy.

"Wh-What's…g-going on…why do I feel so…so…"

Leth's eye lids dropped covering her eyes as she stood standing on her two feet with her head down as well as a grin showed on Bolt's face. He snapped his fingers and when he did she rose her head up and opened her eyes but her 'glowing' neon yellow eyes had now changed into a purple like color with light purple sparkles in her eyes. He smiled as he placed the pendulum in his pocket and placed his hands on Leth's shoulders.

"Now tell me Leth…who is your master?"

"…you are my master Master Bolt."

"Good girl now you will do as I say and command. Is that understood?"

She nodded her head slightly. "Yes Master Bolt." Minutes later Bolt had finished doing what he was going to do before to her. He now had Leth's ankles in the brown stocks with her shoes taken off exposing her dull gray feet and peachy soles with her dull gray four toes with the same claws as her hands along with her wrists were tied together with the rope and were hanging from the ceiling. "Now Leth are you comfortable?" he asked standing behind her. "Yes Master."

"Good good because what I'm going to do now is tickle you but here's the deal…" He got to his knees and moved his lips close to her ear. "When I tickle your body I want you to laugh but when you're being tickled…love it enjoy it Leth. Is that understood?"

"Yes my master."

Since both of them were in the middle of the living room things would be easier for Bolt as he placed his hands on her rib area. "Now remember what I told Leth." He grinned with a smile as he started tickling away on Leth's rib area and as soon as he started tickling she started laughing and did actually what her master wanted.

"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YES MASTER YES TICKLE ME AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA TICKLE ME GOOD MASTER AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YES YES YES AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

"Of course I tickle you good Leth."

"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THANK YOU MASTER BOLT THANK YOU AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHANNA BE TICKLED I LOVE BEING TICKLED AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

He continued moving his hands and fingers up and down Leth's rib area as she continued laughing. Her eyes widened showing her purple eyes since she was under Bolt's control and laughing thanks to the tickling. "Leth do you want your master to stop tickling you," he asked grinning.

"NOOOOOOAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEASEHEHEHEHEHE KEEP GOHOHOHOHOHOHING MASTER AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DON'T STOP DON'T STOP AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE IT I LOVE IT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

"Good answer Leth good answer."

The time was now 12:51 P.M. meaning that Bolt had been tickling Leth's rib area for about ten minutes or so. As he continued he looked over at her face to see her almost having some tears in her eyes but yet. "Leth I'm going to stop for a minute because I'm going to tickle your feet next alright?"

"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YES MAHAHAHAHASTER AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

He stopped as he went for bucket, grabbed the two silver forks, got back on his knees again but stood close to Leth's soles, placed the forks against her soles, and started moving the forks up and down her soles making her eyes widened and making tears stream down her cheeks.

"GAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THAT'S IT MASTER THAT'S IT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS TICKLES SO MUCH I LOHOHOHOHOHOHOVE IT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA KEEP GOING KEEP GOHOHOHOHOHOHOING AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

"So you like it when the forks are tickling your feet…well then I'm going to continue to tickle your soles with these forks then."

"YEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHESSSSS AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THANK YOU MASTER AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THANK YOU SOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO MUCH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THANK YOU AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

The time was now 1:25 P.M. as Leth had her body sweating a lot and Bolt was now stroking the feathers against her soles. For all the minutes that had passed he had tickled her like there was no tomorrow and she enjoyed each and every moment of tickling since she was under his control and now he was tickling her with the feathers.

"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA USE THOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOSE FEATHERS MASTER USE THEM GOOD AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE THE FEELING I LOVE IT SO MUCH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YES YES YES AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!"

"Alright I had my fun with her. It was cool to tickle her for this long but now I think it's time to set her free from the hypnotizing."

He stopped tickling her soles with the feathers and moved in close to Leth's hypnotized face. "Leth when I snap my fingers you will forgot everything that has happen for these past several minutes and you won't be under my control. Understood?" She nodded her head slowly. "Yes Master Bolt." He snapped his fingers as the color purple vanished from her eyes and her 'glowing' neon yellow eyes were back. Before Leth could say a word she found herself lying on the sofa out from the ropes and stocks.

"H-Huh what happened to me?"

"You fell asleep on the sofa Leth," said Bolt sitting on the floor.

She rubbed the back of her head. "Funny I don't remember…Bolt why are my shoes taken off and why do I feel so sweaty…Bolt what did-" She blinked her eyes to see that Bolt taken off leaving some dust behind. She looked around and just sighed as she grabbed her book again and started reading in the same place she was before.

"I have a good feeling in my gut that he tickled me somehow."
A gift for my good friend :icon0leth0:

This came into my head on Saturday but for some reason I didn't want to to do but today I just had to do it XD Hope you enjoy this my friend because I enjoyed typing it up for you=3

Leth (c) :icon0leth0:
Bolt (c) mine
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Cimorine90 Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
I love it when he hypno-tickles. :)
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MintyMousyXFCE Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty funny!
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Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
Hehe thanks=3
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MintyMousyXFCE Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^_^
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universal85 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
Fantastic thunderbolt!
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Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
Thanks bud^^
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Possemaster Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
Fabulous! Nice twist on the usual tickle story! Great job! :)
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Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
Hehe thanks man:D
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0Leth0 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010
Haha Leth had no choice!
This was a very brilliant idea and I just laughed the entire time reading this <333
Oh Leth, you don't know how right you are in the end ;D
Thank you so much Bolt I loved it!
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Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2010
You're welcome my friend I'm glad you enjoyed reading this and that's right Leth had no choice X3
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