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It was a very sunny mid-morning at the Veilstone City Gym as Maylene and her Lucario were mediating in the mediation room increasing their minds and body as well. Maylene’s specialty using pokemon were fighting type pokemon.

As the two continued mediating, Maylene could hear her stomach growling because she hadn’t eaten any breakfast this morning. She opened her eye to the right and saw Lucario in his mediated state.

“Well since he’s mediating I guess I could get a snack,” Maylene thought.

She stood up slowly from the floor as Maylene turned to leave but had to do it quietly so she wouldn’t wake up Lucario. Just then Maylene felt something grab her right leg as she turned to see Lucario holding onto it.

“What do you think you’re going Maylene you’re training’s not done yet,” said Lucario said through telepathy.

“Come on Lucario we’ve been at this for most of the morning and I’m hungry.”

Lucario started growling as he pulled Maylene back to the ground. She sighed as she went back into her mediation with Lucario.

“You can eat after you’re mediation.”

“Fine Lucario fine.”

As the two were about to go back into mediation, Maylene’s stomach started growling even more as Lucario looked over to her annoyed.

“What I can’t help it if I’m hungry Lucario.”

He then closed his eyes as he went back into his mediated state. Maylene however wanted to mediate as well but her stomach was growling so much for some food that she couldn’t take it.

“Lucario I’m sorry but I need to eat something now.”

Maylene stood up quickly as she was about to dash over towards the door to get something to eat but just then something wrapped around her ankles. It was Lucario and he used his feet to trap Maylene.

“Lucario let me gooooaaaaahhhh!”

Maylene fell on her stomach as Lucario sat on top of her. “Maylene I told you we’re not going until we were done mediating but you didn’t listen so now it’s time for you to pay Maylene.”

“Pay? Lucario what are you talking ab…no please not that Lucario.”

“I’m sorry Maylene you must pay.”

Lucario went into Maylene’s shirt and started tickling her sides. This made Maylene laugh because even though she looked like a tough Gym-leader she was very ticklish.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO LUCARIO STOP AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DON’T TICKLE ME PLEASE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Maylene laughed.

“I’m not stopping Maylene because you tried to sneak away and now you have to pay.”

“NOHOHOHOHOHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I’M SORREHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE LUCARIOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO STOP PLEASE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

Lucario continued to tickle Maylene’s sides for about five minutes as she started tapping her hands on the ground begging him to stop.

“PLEASEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE STOP IT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I WON’T SNEAK OFF AGAIN AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEASEHEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Maylene laughed.

Lucario shook his head as he then turned his body around, wrapped his arms around Maylene’s ankles, and started tickling her bare feet.

“GAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOT MY FEET LUCARIO AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ANYWHERE BUT MY FEET AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

Maylene was really banging her fists on the ground as Lucario continued to tickle her feet and to make it worse for Maylene he used his tail to go inside her shirt and tickle her sides fast.

“BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS IS TOHOHOHOHOHOOO MUCH FOR MEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP LUCARIO AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

This continued for a whole twenty minutes as tears were steaming down Maylene’s cheeks as Lucario kept on tickling her feet and sides.

“NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO MORE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LUCARIO NO MOREEEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I’M SORREHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Maylene laughed.

Lucario stopped as he got off of Maylene and she was catching her breath as Lucario went back into his mediating sitting position.

“Maylene once you regained you’re breath get back to you’re mediation state and if you try to leave your spot again I’ll tickle you even longer understand?”

“Yes *pant* Lucario I *pant* understand.”

After a few seconds Maylene was back into her mediation state as she was crying a little bit because she was still hungry for food.
Bet you guys didn't think I would do a tickle story featuring Maylene huh well think again XD. Enjoy:D

These characters are not mine.
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:iconuncleben22:
Uncleben22 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Lucario should have also tickled her feet by licking them with his tongue I wonder what size Maylene's feet are?
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:iconssj3adean:
SSJ3Adean Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Writer
Nw I wonder who the real trainer is.
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:iconpokemonpower501:
PokemonPower501 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
Funnyest Story Ever!
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:iconmewtwofangirl:
Mewtwofangirl Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lucario will be punish i bet
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:iconmewtwofangirl:
Mewtwofangirl Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
what with lucario mediaing
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:iconumbreonkirby:
umbreonkirby Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010
:XD:
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:iconredrodents:
Redrodents Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
You should draw it
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:iconredrodents:
Redrodents Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009
Poor girl
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:iconlarcentyler:
LarcenTyler Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
About time Maylene got tickled. :D
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009
Yup.
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:iconpoketickler:
poketickler Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009
poor maylene
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2009
I know XD
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:icondaughter-of-the-sea:
daughter-of-the-sea Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2009
she repays him! :mwahaha:
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2009
Yup>:3
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:icondaughter-of-the-sea:
daughter-of-the-sea Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2009
oh yeah! :boogie:
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:iconmeeper22:
meeper22 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Whoa, I really didn't think you would do a story between those two.
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Yeah something that came into my mind:D
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:iconmeeper22:
meeper22 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
You ever read my maylene and lucario tickle story?
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Yes I have read that before.
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:iconmeeper22:
meeper22 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2009
What did you think?
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2009
It was good.
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:iconmeeper22:
meeper22 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2009
Yeah, really?
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2009
Yeah it was good.
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:icondarkmagic287:
darkmagic287 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I knew this was going to happen sooner or later, Awesome.
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Thanks I was planning on doing a story like this soon:D
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:icondarkmagic287:
darkmagic287 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
It's cool that you did. :D
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Yeah:3
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:icondarkmagic287:
darkmagic287 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
B-)
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:iconuniversal85:
universal85 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Poor maylene lucario won't give her break for something to eat.Great story thunderbolt!
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Thanks:D
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Phuram Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great. I always wantedto read a tickling storywith her. Since I saw some pics of her on the net she became my favorite gym leader.

And the story is very cute.
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
Thank you:)
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:icondanielwickie:
DanielWickie Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009   Writer
I was wondering when you were going to do a story about that cute, pink haired tomboy. :D
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
Yeah was thinking about it and then decided to do a tickle story on her:D
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:icontaggs-tc:
Taggs-TC Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
That was cute. :3
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
Thanks:)
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:icontaggs-tc:
Taggs-TC Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
welcome. :3
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:iconavalarguardian:
AvalarGuardian Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Man, that's not fair.
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
Sure it is XD
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:iconavalarguardian:
AvalarGuardian Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
No it's not! Getting tickled just because yer hungry.
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
Oh well he takes mediating sort of serious.
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:iconavalarguardian:
AvalarGuardian Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, a little too serious! XD
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:iconthunder-bolt:
Thunder-Bolt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
XD
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:iconavalarguardian:
AvalarGuardian Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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