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It was a beautiful evening as Dawn was training her Pachirisu for the upcoming contest and May an old friend of Ash and Brock was training her Blaziken for the upcoming contest as well. The two trainers were both determined  to win the contest no matter what it took. As they were done training the two girls went inside the Pokemon Center to take a break from the training.

“So May how did the training go for you and your Blaziken?” Dawn asked. May turned to Dawn and said, “It went great how about you and your Pachirisu?” Dawn gave a thumbs up and said, “We did great as usual.” May smiled and said, “That’s good to hear but don’t think I’m going to go easy on you just because we’re friends.” Dawn nodded and said, “Same here.”

Meanwhile outside the Pokemon Center two of May and Dawn’s rivals were walking towards the Pokemon Center. May’s rival Drew and Dawn’s early childhood friend Kenny. These two had already signed up for the contest since they were prepared and the two had already introduced themselves. Before they were about to go inside the Pokemon Center they saw Dawn and May sitting down on the seats.

“Well looks like my rival May going to be in this contest,” said Drew. “And it looks like my rival is here as well,”said Kenny. But before they were about to go in the Pokemon Center, Kenny pulled Drew to the side of the building. “Hey what’s with the pulling?” Drew asked. Kenny then sat on the ground and said, “I thought of a great idea and it involves Dawn and May.”

“How so?” Drew asked as he sat down next to Kenny. “Well…” Kenny was whispering to Drew of what they were going to do. Then there was a smile on Drew’s face as he stood up and said, “Nice plan Kenny and wouldn’t you know I have two black coaks in my backpack.” Kenny chuckled and said, “Alright we are going to be doing this tonight so no one will hear us.”

Drew nodded and said, “Good and while we’re doing this I’ll get May and you can get Dawn.” Kenny nodded as the two were preparing for what they were about to do to Dawn and May. The evening had changed to night as May and Dawn were in their separate rooms preparing to get some sleep when they both heard a knock at their doors. They both opened the door at the same time when two black figures in front of them.

Before they could answer something the figures knocked both May and Dawn as they fell to the floor. The figures walked into each room with something in their hands. In Dawn’s room the figure pulled out his hand to show a pair of rope and then tied it around Dawn’s wrists and ankles. The same thing was happening to May as the figure in that room was tying up her wrists and ankles.

It take long for Dawn to wake from that blow to the head and she realized that she was tied up. She looked up and saw the figure in front of her. “Who are you?!” The black figure didn’t respone but the figure did walk over to Dawn and sat on her legs and started tickling her underarms. “Heyeehehehehehehehehehehehehehe stop it hehehehehehehehehehehe C’mooooaahahahahahahahahannnnn!”

Meanwhile in the other room May was having her underams tickled as well by the other black. “Staahahahahahahahahahahahap doooooooooing thaaahahahahahahahahahattt!” May giggled “Pleaseeeehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe whyeeeeeeeeee are you dooooing thissss hehehehehehehehehehehehehe!” The figure didn’t as the black figure continued to tickle her underarms.

Back at the other room Dawn’s armpits were still being tickled by the black figure. “No moooorrrrreeehehehehehehehehehehehehehe cut it oooahahahahahahahahahaha!” Dawn giggled “Pleaseeeehehehehehehehehehe stop thissss hehehehehehehehehehehehehe!” The black figure was now moving its hands lower to Dawn’s belly as the figure was tickling her sides.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOT THEREEEEHEHEHE PLEASEEEEE AHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Dawn laughed “THAAAHAHAHAHHAHATT IS MYEEEEEEHEHEHEHEHE TICKLISH SPOOOOTT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” The figure continued to tickle Dawn’s belly as tears were steaming down her face and the same thing was happening to May as well.


Back with Dawn the figure was back to tickling Dawn’s underarms and now her underarms were ticklish than before. “STOP IT STOP IT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PLEASEEEEEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE I CAN’T BREATHEEEE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Dawn laughed. The figure then hit Dawn in the head as she fell asleep on her floor.

“STOP IT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MERCYEEEEHEHEHEHEHE PLEASEEEE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I CAN’T TAAAAAKEEEEEE THIS ANYMOREEEEEEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” May laughed as she was still being tickled on her sides. Then this figure also knocked out May on the head as it left the room. As the two came out they both nodded as they went into certain rooms.

The morning sun had risen up as Ash and Brock were standing outside. “So the day has come for the contest let’s clear on May and Dawn,” said Ash. “Right,” said Brock. As the door opened Ash and Brock turned around to see a tried Dawn and May standing. “Hey what happened to you two,” Brock asked. Dawn and May didn’t respond as they fell to the ground. Meanwhile in their beds, Kenny and Drew both had smiles on their faces and they both thought, “Best fun ever!”
A request from :iconjiraiya-snake:

This person wanted a fic about about May and Dawn being tickled before one of their contest. Hope you like it.

These characters are not mine.
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Victorious2221 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Make one when Dawn and May tickling eachother or a revenge on Dawn or may
Ehj3 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
I like this, but when I read the title, I thought it was may and dawn tickling each other, not them being tickled.
superpokemonmaster2 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
lol i love it hey can u do one with jarochie plzzzzzzz
DarkMatery Featured By Owner May 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
they were very mean those two!great story!
FireFoxSF Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008
sounds like sum'n that happens in a summer camp. hahahaha. aahh, memories XD
AvalarGuardian Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn, no feet tickle! XD
RenamonTamer214 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
YAY my 2 ave pokemon girls
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