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Messin With A Zeti

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On a planet known as the Lost Hex, a certain battle was coming to a close. In a zone called Frozen Factory, our hero Sonic the Hedgehog was just finishing up a battle with one of the members of a group of demon like creatures known as the Deadly Six. The creature that Sonic is currently battling is name Zeena, and she is the only female of the Zeti.

The battle continues more only a short time until finally Sonic destroys the last of the snowmen, sending the snowman’s head and middle body flying into the air. And in the process sending Zeena flying out as well, landing on her back. She quickly got to her feet and stared intensely at the hedgehog, who was grinning victoriously.

“How could you hit a lady like me?! How dare you!”

“Sorry Snowcone…oh wait I’m really not sorry hehe.”

“Ooooo you little *gasp* MY NAILS!!!!!

Zeena had glanced down at her pink nail polish to see that her color was nearly ruined. She gritted her teeth and glared at Sonic with more intense angry in her eyes.

“YOU RUINED MY NAIL ART!!!!!”

“…seriously? That’s what you’re upset about? That’s lame…”

“Lame?! LAME?! DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG THIS TOO ME TO GET DONE?! DO YOU?! I’LL HAVE YOU KNOW THIS TOOK ME ABOUT-

“Hey Snowcone,” said Sonic interrupting her. “As much as I would “love” to hear you talk about your nails and how I “ruined” them, you might want to move…”

“Huh?! What are you talking about Blue boy?”

Sonic could only grin as he pointed up to the sky with his right thumb. Dumbfounded, Zeena had no idea what he was talking about until she noticed a black circle forming underneath her. The circle started getting darker after each second. The Zeti titled her up and saw that it was the snowman’s head and middle body that Sonic had kicked early was coming down fast. Before she could even react, the snowball head landed right on top of her causing the ground to shake and caused pieces of snow to land on the surrounding area.

“Hey I did warn you,” said Sonic chuckling. “Well time for me to move on.”

Sonic turned around and was about to dash to the next zone; when he noticed the head of the snowman began shaking. After a few seconds, Zeena’s head and shoulders popped out from the top and shook her head rapidly to remove the snow from her head and green hair. Suddenly she heard the sound of laughter as she saw Sonic rolling on the snow ground; laughing and pointing out.

“Stop laughing at me! This isn’t funny!”

“You’re right this isn’t funny, it’s hilarious!”

“Oooo wait till I get out of here! You’ll pay for ruining my nails!”

Zeena began struggling to free herself from the two giant snowballs but for some reason the more she struggled, the harder it was for her to break free. Sonic, still laughing a little, watched as she continually tried to free herself. She took a few seconds to catch her breath and then tried to free herself again but to no avail. “W-What’s going on?! I can’t get free! Why can’t I get free?!”

“Hey uh Snowcone as funny as this is, I’m heading to the next zone. See ya!”

“H-Hey wait! You can leave a lady like me in this situation!”

The hedgehog was going to say one of his sarcastic remarks but after staring at the Zeti, trapped in the snowballs, an idea popped in his head and smiled.

“You know what…you’re absolutely right; I shouldn’t leave a lady in this situation.”

The green Zeti blinked with a bit shocked expression. “I am? O-Of course I am! A woman such as myself shouldn’t be trapped like this! Now hurry up and get me of here this instant!”

Sonic ran over to her and stood in front of her. He slowly began moving his hands over to Zeena’s shoulders to set her free. As he moved his hands closer, a smug like smile appeared across her face. “As soon as Blue Boy frees me, I’m gonna destroy him in an instant. Ooo it’ll be soooo much fun!”

Just then Zeena noticed Sonic’s hands slowly moving away from her shoulders; and just as she was about to ask what he was doing, he dove his hands into the second big snowball.

“Hey I thought you were going to free me!”

“Oh I am Snowcone! Well kinda yes and kinda no,” he said with his grin. “Now let me see if I can them…hold on give me a second to…found them!”

With that same grin on his face, Sonic yanked his hands out from the snowball and in the process; Zeena’s shoulders were brought deeper down into the snowball, exposing only her head and trapping her in more. However what Sonic pulled out dumbfounded and annoyed the female Zeti. Looking forward she saw that two of her small feet were sticking out of the snowball. She then glared at the hedgehog.

“What the big idea?! You only pulled out my feet! And now I’m stuck in these snowballs even more!”

“Actually Snowcone…that was the idea.”

“What are you talk…EEEK!

Zeena let out from her mouth a little yelp as Sonic had ran his one finger from the bottom of her one sole up to her toes.

“Well well what do we have here? A powerful Zeti like you is…ticklish?”

“W-What?! Of course not!”

“Well then let’s test it out then.”

Sonic immediately placed both of his index fingers against the Zeti’s bare soles and slow began running them up and down. Zeena’s feet began twitching out as she felt his fingers. She began biting her lower lip, preventing herself from giggling. She didn’t want to admit it but her feet were indeed ticklish. The hedgehog glanced up at her and saw that she was trying to hold in her laughter.

“Aw what the matter; I thought you said you were ticklish?”

“I-I’m….n-not t-t-ticklish!”

He gave off another sly grin as he started stroking against her soles in a much faster pace. Zeena bit her lip a bit more but couldn’t hold her giggling as much as she wanted to. She began shaking her head left and right, swaying her hair as well, trying to break free from the snowballs but once again she couldn’t break free. Sonic however was enjoying every second; tickling the Zeti to her knees. He watched as her feet continued twitching around.

“Whehehehen I get out of hehehehere you’re dead!”

“You know threatening me while stuck in there…not a wise choice…”

His grin grew widely as he placed all of his fingers against Zeena’s soles and began tickling them uncontrollably, showing no mercy to the Zeti. Her eyes widened big as she couldn’t hold in the giggling and just went into straight on laughter. Her feet were twitching all around, trying to move away from the hedgehog’s fingers but to no avail. She began shaking her head all around, laughing her head. Tears began flowing down her cheeks, ruining her mascara color.

“NOOOOHOHOHOHO MY MASCARAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!”

“Wow this is a lot of fun than I thought it would be hehe.”

“STAHAHAHAHAP IT AHAHAHAHA STAHAHAHAHAP!”

“Hm let me think about it…nah I’m good.”




No more than 15 minutes passed in the zone with the sound of Zeena’s laughter going on however going much fainter. Sonic had stopped using his fingers to tickle her right foot and had started using the nose of the snowman to tickle her. He had glanced up at the female Zeti to see her mascara was completely ruined; thanks to her tears, her laughter had gone much fainter, and she was so tired that she didn’t have the strength to move her feet anymore.

“…p-please hehehehe…no more…hehe…no more…”

Sonic gave a slightly smirk as he dropped the carrot to the snowy ground and stood up on his feet, stretching out his arms and legs for a few seconds. He then formed into his spin ball and dashed around the trapped Zeti. Within seconds, Zeena was freed and was seen lying on her back, gasping for air as he reverted out from his ball form.

“Well that was pretty fun; and who knew you were ticklish Snowcone. Heh I guess you do learn something every day. And now if you’ll excuse me I have a world to save.”

And with that, Sonic used his super speed and made his way to the next zone. Zeena however was still gasping for air after her turn of events.

“He’ll *pant* pay for this *pant* as soon *pant* as I finish *pant* taking a warm bath…”
What's this another story? And it's a tickle story? What the hell is going on?!

Yeah I finished the gift story for my friend, this idea came to mind after I watched a walkthrough of Sonic Lost World, a poor walkthrough.

Anyhoo I have a grown a liking to Zeena, even if she is a villain and what better way to do it by making a tickle story about her. Hope you all enjoy the story.

And by the way: Please don't get used to me posting more stories. It was a the heat of moment so don't expect anymore for a while...again.

Sonic, Zeena, Frozen Factory (c) Sega
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hey zeena *trombone solo*