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Afterschool Tickling

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It was a sunny and cloudy morning as Jake was running through a grassy field and was heading off to school. He had overslept in the morning and now was rushing to get to school or he was going to get into lots of trouble.

“That’s the last time I stay up during a school night,” Jake said to himself.

He had to stop several times to catch his breath and he could tell by the sun that he was extremely late for class. The school wasn’t that far away now but Jake was getting closer to his school.

“I *pant* finally *pant* made it.”

Jake stood in front of his school had to make sure his teacher, Mrs. Lili didn’t see him. He peeked into the window and saw his teacher with the black hair and white/blue dress as she was writing on the board.

“Good she doesn’t know I’m here yet so maybe I can still make it.”

Jake took another peek through the window and saw that his teacher wasn’t at the chalkboard anymore. “Huh where did she-”

Before he could finish, he felt someone tap his shoulder as he turned around slowly to see his teacher Mrs. Lili standing in front of him with her arms crossed. “M-Mrs. Lili how did you…I can explain you see I-”

“You don’t have to tell me Jake…you overslept at home didn’t you?”

Jake chuckled a little bit but Mrs. Lili wasn’t chuckling for one minute. “Young man you know my rules for being late…detention after school.”  As Mrs. Lili walked back into the school, Jake let out a groan and decided to stay outside for a few seconds.

“Well what a way this morning as turned out.”

The day went by fast when was ok with Jake because he was sleeping for most of the day since he knew that he was going to have to stay after school for detention. His classmates Saren (boy with spiky, black hair) and Mia (red head girl) were also staying after school.

“Hey Saren let’s have some fun with Jake if you know what I mean.”

“Oh yeah Mia I know what you mean.”

Several minutes later Jake’s ankles were placed in stocks with his sandals removed and his wrists were tied in the air showing his underarms. Mia kneeled down in front of Jake’s feet as Saren stood behind Jake.

“Time for a wake up call.”

Saren started tickling Jake’s underarms as Mia started tickling Jake’s soles which woke him up immediately and made him start laughing.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU GUYS KNOCK IT OFF NOW AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA COME ON AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Jake laughed.

“Sorry Jake put you’ve been bad,” said Mia smiling.

“That’s right you have to punished,” said Saren grinning.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU JERKS AHAHAHA KNOCK IT OFF AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP IT NOW AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

Jake was laughing his head off as the two continued tickling his soles and underarms and they were both having the time of their lives but Jake wasn’t.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS ISN”T YOU GUYS AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA QUIT TICKLING MEEEEEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Jake laughed.

They continued to tickle him for five minutes as Jake started sweaty because he had been tickled for so long. Mia and Saren then stopped tickling him as they switched sides so now Saren was tickling his soles and Mia was tickling his underarms.

“NOOOOOAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAYOU GUYS SUCK AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NO MORE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP IT!” Jake laughed.

“No way this is too much fun dude,” said Saren still grinning.

“I agree with Saren this is too much fun,” Mia said giggling.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA COME ON NO FAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAIR AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NO MORE NO MORE AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”

They continued to tickle Jake’s soles and underarms for ten minutes as he had to hold back his tears. Mia and Saren were getting bored anyway so they stopped and released Jake from the ropes and stocks.

Later Crystal comes to pick Jake up after school and takes him home. “I am never going to be late for school ever again.” He turned around to see Mia and Saren waving bye to him with both of them grinning.
A request from :iconbloodthirster:

He wanted a story about his character Jake being late for school and then getting detention for being late. The during afterschool is tickled by Mia and Saren, his other characters.

For those who didn't read my journal: :THIS WILL BE THE ONLY AND LAST TIME I EVER DO A HUMAN MALE TICKLING STORY FOR A REQUEST AND ART TRADE SO DON'T BOTHER ASKING ME DO ONE. THANK YOU

All characters (c) :iconbloodthirster:
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